Tuesday, November 23, 2010

Here's what happened:


Hannah and my mom were in Bakersfield, California for a Redlands East Valley High School band competition. After the competition, the whole band went to a place called Jon's Incredible Pizza to have a big party from 11pm to 2am. Ms Glass, the band director, did everything right: there were probably 40 adult chaperones present, and the kids were actually "locked in" at the restaurant. They'd rented out the whole place, so it was just band members and chaperones inside, and the kids had to be "cleared" to leave. That is my understanding. I think Ms. Glass took every precaution.


So at about 1:00am, my mom went back to the hotel to go to sleep. Around 2:00am, the band started coming home to the Clarion hotel across the street. When they got to the intersection, the chaperones started taking the kids across the street in smaller groups. The intersection had a signal light and a crosswalk.

This is a map of the accident location. The kids were crossing the street after having a party at Jon's Incredible Pizza. They were heading toward the Clarion.

A band member named Julia told us that she was walking about 5 feet in front of Hannah, and that she (Julia) had just stepped onto the curb (after finishing crossing the street) when she heard screeching brakes and a big thump. Then she turned and saw the car drive away. So Hannah and Zach were almost done crossing. The person who hit them was running a red light (which had been red for quite a while). Other band kids said that Hannah was launched from the impact.


From what I understand, Zach (who later received 80 stitches on his head) got up immediately and stumbled around in shock and confusion before sitting on the curb.


Conrad & Sally Lucero were with Hannah within seconds, and so was Tracey (a nurse). In the next minute, Ms. Lucero had run to the Clarion to call my mom from the lobby.


When my mom got the call, she was told to come to the Lobby, because there had been an accident. Mom says she didn't really understand what "accident" meant. She initially thought it was some sort of accident in the lobby--like someone falling down stairs, or tripping. She'd fallen asleep in her clothes, so she was out of the room in seconds. When the elevator doors opened after reaching the lobby, my mom saw the entire band holding hands in a circle, praying. (Se cries every time she talks about that, now). That's when she knew it was bigger than shed first thought, and that it was Hannah who was involved.


Mom says that someone (a man) put a coat on her (it was pouring rain outside). Thank you to whoever that was.


Ms. Lucero took her arm and led her outside, and talked to her the whole way to the intersection, prepping her for what she'd see when she got there. Thank you Ms. Lucero, for being there for my mom in that awful moment. Mom said she (my mom) must've kicked into adrenaline mode. When they reached the intersection, Hannah was lying in the street. The ambulance had just arrived, and the EMTs were cutting Hannah's clothes off. Hannah was fighting them big time (which is apparently very common with head trauma), so my mom kept saying, "Hannah, you gotta let them do this. Let the EMTs help you."


The road is four lanes on either side. At 2am, my mom said it wasn't very busy. It was raining.

The EMTs loaded Hannah into the ambulance, and my mom said, "Hey! Can I come in the ambulance?!?"

The EMT guy yelled, "Get in!"

Mom turned to Ms. Lucero and said, "Please bring my stuff." and then jumped into the ambulance (passenger seat, not the back) and they shut the doors.


Driving to the hospital, mom said that she could hear Hannah fighting them on everything (there was a little window, which was open, between the driver area and the back. Mom was trying to call out comforting things to Hannah, but doesn't know if Hannah heard/understood her at that point.


They arrived at Kern County Hospital, and a team of people were waiting for them. My mom watched for about 30 minutes, then asked for a phone to call my dad (she didn't have anything with her -- no cell phone). After two unsuccessful tries on the house phone, she called Rachel's cell phone (who ALWAYS picks up), and Rachel ran down and woke my dad. They started calling the rest of us at around 6:00am.

Hannah was transfered to Loma Linda Hospital in an ambulance later that same morning/afternoon. She was in the Pediatric Intensive Care Unit, until they told her last night (Monday night) that she was stable enough to be moved to Basic Care.


Hannah has a skull fracture that runs from the top of her head to just below/behind her right earlobe. She was leaking CSF behind her ear, but the Loma Linda Pediatric Neurologist handled it. (My mom was the one who saw the area and asked about it, and then the neurologist was called in immediately.) He found a piece of glass embedded under the skin, and stitched up the area. It's under control now.

Her skull fracture has set itself naturally. Normally, if an entire section of the skull is dislodged, they staple it into place. But because Hannah's skull is still intact all around the fracture, she won't have to have staples, and the skull can heal just how it is.


She had some bleeding on the brain, and some air beneath the fracture, but both were to a small enough degree that the doctors didn't feel it was a danger to her.


Her tibia on her right leg was snapped in half. (That's where they think the car initially struck her.) At first, the doctors thought she may have to have surgery to put in a metal plate on the tibia, but they decided they could just set the bone. They set it Monday morning, and said that Hannah was very tough during that process. They gave her a lot of morphine for the pain.


She has a bruised lung, but no bleeding. That will heal on its own. They're giving her antibiotics to fight off infection.


Probably the scariest part visually was her face: HUGE gashes in the soft tissue of her face. Very gorey, and very deep. My dad was a MESS about that, but he's doing much better. Brother Andreason from church, a plastic surgeon, was EXTREMELY helpful in choosing the surgeon for the job. My parents are very grateful to him. The reconstruction surgery occurred Sunday night. Hannah has 300+ stitches in her face. It looks much better now. She looks just like Hannah.


We've all been able to visit with her, but she is sedated and sleeping most of the time, and when she is awake, she is completely exhausted (too tired to open her eyes or speak), nauseated and dizzy.


Thank you everyone for your thoughts, well wishes, prayers, meals and helpfullness. My parents are very grateful. We are ALL very grateful.

Tuesday, November 9, 2010

I LOVE Autumn.

Thursday, November 4, 2010

Request from an Agent

I've had another request from an agent! This will be the seventh request I've had for a partial manuscript (anywhere from 15-100 pages). The first six agent ultimately turned the book down.

I've really been working HARD on making this book the best it can be -- I've cut so much fluff, changed entire segments to move the plot forward more rapidly, and axed characters who weren't contributing. Editing your own book is so difficult, because your so close to everything. But I'm really trying to do what it takes to become a published author.

Hopefully, an agent will accept my work and want to represent me. If not this one, though, there will be another one. I've just got to stay positive and keep at it.


Thursday, October 28, 2010

It's fun being up here in the Giants' home turf while the World Series is going on. Cal is really getting into the spirit of things...


In other news, I've been called as an Achievement Days leader in my ward. I was a little nervous about it at first, but it has turned out to be extremely fun. I'm getting along really well with the girls (I'm with the 11-year-olds), and the leader all treat me like I'm an expert with "tweens". I do feel pretty happy where I am, but I definitely walk into every activity thinking, "Welp, hope they like this." I'm very relieved when they get into the activity. Last week, I taught them Halloween songs, and tonight we did a modest costume fashion show. I'll probably be hitting you all up for ideas, so please stay tuned!

Wednesday, October 27, 2010

Cupertino Residents

Well, we are officially California residents. (Except for Reed's car...curse the DMV).

I am LOVING our new place. Yes, it was initially a shock moving to a smaller apartment and paying twice the rent, but I'm over it. Our place isn't too small for entertaining, which is usually the make-or-breaker for me. We've had several couples over, not to mention the missionaries (who are always in awe over a well-cooked meal), and everything has been great.

I'm making a huge effort to be social, and for once, the effort has been paying off: I feel like I have several friends in this new ward, and one very good friend in particular--Lora. She reminds me of Rachel, in that she knows how to do everything (can we say go-to girl?). It's been nice to have someone so capable and fun to hang out with.

Cal and I have been to a handful of farmers markets, and he LOVES to eat the sample pieces of fruit that the stands put out. He and I have been having a lot of fun.

More updates to come. I'm wanting to get back into blogging. I like it!

Friday, August 6, 2010

Strawberry Swirl Cake

I made this for Reed's birthday, and it was really yummy, and REALLY simple:



I did it in a bundt pan instead of two rounds, and then topped each slice with the cream and strawberries instead of frosting the cake.

Just thought I'd pass along the recipe!

Monday, March 29, 2010

Sick baby

Well, we managed to keep him healthy for 8 months, but I guess it's inevitable with babies: they're going to get sick. It's so sad. It's clear he doesn't understand what's going on, or why he feels awful. He just looks at me, confused, breathing heavily through his mouth like a huge nerd. Even his little cry is hoarse.

There is nothing sadder than a sick baby! :(

Wednesday, March 3, 2010

First Rejection

Well, I guess I'm a real author now.

I got my first rejection letter last week.

On to the next agent!


Sunday, February 21, 2010

Ode To Girl Scout Cookies

You have to read this. My little sister Hannah wrote this poem---why is it so applicable to my life???




Ode To Girl Scout Cookies



Heaven sings

Your grateful praise

Your graciousness and mercy

Succoms us all


Such sweet amazingness

Titans bow to

A girl in a green vest

Your tasty dictatorship overpowers


Is it your lemonades?

Or you Caramel of Awesome?

That lures me

To a delicious grave


Grant me another

And I will sell my soul

For a box

Of Fudge Patties


Tuesday, February 9, 2010

Going to Asilomar!


I am so excited! This week, I received an email informing me that there was an open slot at the Asilomar Writer's Conference, so I talked to Reed, and I am going! Asilomar is a beautiful state park near Monterey, California, right on the coast.

For those of you who are unfamiliar with what a writing conference is, it's a convention where writers of a particular genre get together to discuss the craft. There are tons of authors who come to speak.

Here's a photo of the main lecture hall on the Asilomar campus:


Here's the inside--isn't it beautiful?
The campus is spread out all over the state beach.
This is the social hall, where the meet-and-greets happen.

I am particularly happy to be going, because an agent I am interested in will be there. There are all these rules and etiquette regarding how you approach an agent, but for the most part, a conference is a decent opportunity to pitch a book to them. (Cue nervousness)

I'm getting all my documents in order, I've contacted my peer-editor, made my plane tickets, arranged for my mom to watch Cal (she was only too happy to accept), and ordered materials that I need. This is going to be a busy week, preparing my manuscript, synopses, and such.

I'm excited! Feb 19-21, think of me!

Saturday, January 30, 2010

The Rose Parade

Happy New Year :)


Over the vacation, my family went to the Rose Parade -- 20 years in California, and we'd never been! It was really fun, and surprisingly, not that hard/exhausting. Seeing all the floats going past was awesome. Here are a few of our favorites:
This one had real bulldogs, going down on sleds! Oh my gosh I want a dog so bad.

Friday, January 22, 2010

Revising and Querying

About two weeks ago, I finished up the first draft of my book. Now comes the revision process, which I've found I enjoy much more than I thought I would. It's a chance to look at my characters--to strengthen them, to contrast them even further, to make them truly come alive. I'm also trying to improve other things: dialogue believability, plot cohesion, and the hardest of all for some reason: pacing.

And then there's the whole "approaching the agent" thing. I've read Guide to Literary Agents, made my short list, researched what the agencies have recently represented, and finally--contacted my top choice through formal e-query, complete with cover letter, synopsis and first five pages.

Now....I wait. The agent's response will take four weeks at the least, and so in the meantime, I'l be revising even further.

Writing a book has been an awesome experience, but it has also been a little intense sometimes. Lately, I'm plagued with those all-too-common discouraging thoughts like, "Who am I kidding? No one's going to publish me!"

Ignore! I must ignore! :)

I know how common rejection is, and I'm prepared for it. I just wish it didn't sometimes come from my own discouraged brain! Booo...

Thursday, January 21, 2010

Baby Song Parodies

I don't really know when it started, but in our house, we are always making up alternate lyrics to songs -- lyrics that correspond to something we're doing, or something about one another. Well, as you can imagine, with a new baby in the house, there are endless possibilities.

I just had to post our latest composition. (It's from the baby's point of view)

To the tune of Miley Cyrus' "Party in the USA" (the chorus):

I throw my hands up, scratchin' my face,
You know I'm gonna scream all day,
Stompin' my feet like Waaaaa!
Poopin' my pants like Waaaaa!
Then my mom comes--she's changin' my dipe,
I know it's gonna be okay.
Waaaaaa-a-aaaa-a-aaee-aaee-aaaa....
it's a party in my Pack and Play!